Laughter lines and soft grey eyes,
A fair and gentle face.
I miss you smiling back at me,
As your features I retrace.
I map out your face –
And recall one look,
Binding us together –
Like the pages of a book.
Beyond your eyes,
Lies your soul to see –
Reaching out for someone,
Reaching out to me.
Your touch, your smell,
Are harder to find –
But I see you still,
In the corners of my mind.
I see shades of you –
Like shadows of my past,
Your smile, your laugh,
All gone now too fast.
To see you, to hold you,
But more than all of this –
There’s nothing I wouldn’t do,
For just one more kiss
This is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed it very much. The yearning and missing is palpable.
My kiss entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/28/forever-changed-2/
Thanks – I’m so glad you enjoyed my poem π
Superbly devised and crafted. Enjoyed it a lot.
Thank you π
An absolutely beautiful poem of rememberance….wonderful to read,
Thank you – I’m so pleased you like my poem π
magical moments are like wind,
done fast indeed.
bittersweet memories, well done.
True! Thanks for taking the time to read my poem π
Beyond your eyes,
Lies your soul to see
Lovely
Thank you!
beautiful…
π
Thanks π
love it, brilliant reflections on life.
Thanks for reading my poem. I’m glad you liked it π
Very sad and emotive π
Thanks I’m glad you liked it π
“I map out your face –
And recall one look,
Binding us together –
Like the pages of a book.” — BRILLIANT!
Thank you – I’m so glad you enjoyed my poem π
I loved this poem. It is haunting and real. Indeed, just one more kiss. Thank you. hugs, pat
Thanks, too, for your visit to me.
Thanks Pat – I’m really pleased you liked this one π
“In the corners of my mind” lovely said.
Thanks for reading my poem π