Crushed

Crushed by a lie,
Torn in time,
Held in the hurt,
A mountain to climb.

Reaching for reason,
Searching the why’s,
Looking for something,
And trusting the skies.

The coldness of tone,
The crispness of view,
Leads me to wonder,
If I really knew you.

Turning my back,
On one and on all,
Becoming a recluse,
Afraid of the fall.

Searching for no-one,
Looking at all,
Seeing the flaws,
Ignoring the call.

A dusting of hope,
Revealed through the years,
Settles on the doubts,
Of those wasted tears.

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17 Responses to Crushed

  1. How we are always struggling with one another. May be we should just give up the struggling for good. Give a hug ( if possible) and then follow each our own destiny to find new people on that path. OK?

  2. slpmartin says:

    The poem brought back some of the emotions of my first love…now but a memory….enjoyed your poem.

  3. Cherlyn says:

    Ahhh this makes me think of….pretty much every relationship I’ve ever had. Ouch :P. Other than that, it’s a great poem, it definitely is relatable to most people! Thanks for sharing πŸ™‚

    Here’s mine: http://cursemymetalbody.wordpress.com/2011/10/20/poetry-thursday-70/

  4. poetryroad says:

    Powerfully written with such emotion!

  5. bendedspoon says:

    This was me several sleepless nights ago. Great write πŸ™‚

  6. Glad you ended this with a bit of hope. There is always hope!
    Very nice write. Well done.

    You might enjoy this one: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/19/perfect-love/

  7. A.B. Thomas says:

    Very well crafted piece, it harkens me to those times I secluded myself from the world with total resolve to let the wounds fester instead of heal

  8. a fundamental topic tackled here.
    hope is priceless, keep it up.

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